My First Funeral
She was lying in a casket
She was dressed lovely like a priest
Her dress color was blue like the sky and white like the clouds
Her shirt also had golden stripes
She looks like she was sleeping
Even though she wasn´t
She was not breathing
This was my first funeral
I know how it feels to lose someone special
She helped my parents to raise me
My aunt was crying like water splashing
My dad was really sad
Everybody was sad
I was very sad and lonely
I wanted cry
My heart was pounding fast
My brother was next to me
He did not know what was going on
It was cloudy and cold outside
The sun started to come out
The sun shined at my Grandmother
I felt like she was rising because of the sun
Death is horrible and bad
l´m sorry she had to leave
Her age eventually gave up on her
But now my grandmother is in a better place
I like how you were really descriptive with the overall mood of everyone. It shows how it was a quiet, but sobbing moment.
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ReplyDeleteFirst of all sorry about your grandma and I like how you show your sadness with this poem. I felt your sadness while I read your poem.
ReplyDeleteReally good poem and sorry about your grandma RIP and good job being really descriptive
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