World Of Drugs
Everyone knows drugs are bad
Yet we still use them
using only makes society mad
it becomes mayhem
starts off smoking just a tad
smoking with your friend brad
but you just on the launching pad
a good life is what you had
you knew it was bad
didn’t listen to your dad
It grows and now you’re sad
couldn’t stop when you were an undergrad
trying new drugs, you thought were rad
you can’t stop and now you’re mad
you end up on the street and become a nomad
looking for a help wanted ad
so you can make up the money you had
now you’re gonna end up like your grandad
a deadbeat dad
you should have been glad
that what you had
was good life in your past
you know what would make society glad
if you never met that friend brad
you wouldn't have been doing something so bad
I liked how you made the entire poem rhyme and it really added rhythm to your poem.
ReplyDeleteThe rhyme is really cool!
ReplyDeleteWow this is really cool how it rhymed! I didn't know so many things ended in ad but you showed me a lot of words that did that. Do you actually have a friend named brad?
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyming in this poem, good job.
ReplyDeleteHow you managed to make all of the words make sense and still rhyme at the same time made for quite the compelling poem!
ReplyDeleteI like the rhythm of the poem
ReplyDeleteI really like the rhymes in your poem, and the meaning is very strong !
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